If someone put the Encyclopedia of Fantasy Tropes and Stereotypes into novel form and then had a stoned college student transcribe it for maximum typos, this is about what I would expect to see come out the other side. (For example, "solider" and "soldier" are both words, but not interchangeable. Also, you cannot ever, ever say "here" when you mean "her"... and so on. There is a reason proofreaders get paid for their work, and it's to keep people like you, Mr. Gischler, from looking like a chump.)

This is a great novel for children going to middle school to show them what's like. And i just want to have a slumber party now with my all my friends and do what Nicole friends did. Continue to makes these type of books Melanie Marks. You're going in the right direction.